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The Forty-Seven Words of the Broken Girl

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Jazz, writing and outlining: I’m no ‘Trane

Improviser, please One of the ticks of the writing community I loathe is the use of “pantser” (for seat-of-the-pants-er) to describe people who don’t outline. Pantser brings to mind a middle school boy who yanks down other people’s trousers. Not exactly the kind of person I want to be associated …

Aftermath: violence in fiction

Cinematic carnage Last night, I rewatched one of my favorite film, Takeshi “Beat” Kitano’s Hana-Bi (Fireworks)[1]. Hana-bi is a violent film, but its use of violence is radically different than most other films. Kitano rarely shows the entirety of the violence, nor does he foreshadow it. In one of the …

The Accidental YA Author

This is my current reading list: It is almost certain this list will change, but of those titles, only the last is a Young Adult (YA) novel—and it was originally published as an adult novel in Australia. Given my aspirations as a writer, this list is all wrong. I should …

Joy

The above rights-infringing work sitting on a bus stop bench is my personal reward for finishing my first draft. Technically, it’s not my first draft, since it switches the last two chapters and has a significant number of other edits. But I’ll call it the official record of the first …

Plotting

  I suck at plotting. I’m the writer who writes chapter after chapter of people sitting around and having tea, developing their characters so deeply that I start mimicking their gestures as I type. I really do this. It’s embarrassing. Don’t do this in front of other people, particularly if …

Tweet as Pitch

But juicy prizes are juicy prizes and taking some time to distill my plot to a skull, clavicle and hip bone isn’t necessarily a bad project. So today I introduce the Official Tweet-sized Pitch™ of The Forty-Seven Words of the Broken Girl